"Superhero in the Suburbs . . . Life just got a lot more shocking."


Adaline Sparks isn’t your average teenager. And it’s not her bright blue hair that sets her apart from the crowd. By day, she plays the part of a high school senior. But at night, she dons a padded suit and mask and patrols the streets as Volt: the super-shocking superhero of The City. Life as a superhero was going great until her father decided that it was time for a transfer: to small-town Shelton, Indiana. Adaline is haunted by one question: Can a superhero survive in the crime-free Midwest? But Shelton isn’t as crime-free as Adaline expected and before long she stumbles onto the biggest case she has ever uncovered. Along the way, she finds friendship with a variety of Shelton residents, including her attractive next-door neighbor, a Volt-adoring sophomore, and an aspiring journalist who is only steps away from uncovering her secret identity. But one man has already uncovered her secret: a fellow, flying super who is a little too arrogant for his own good. Can she ignore the attraction she has for this flyboy and partner with him long enough to uncover the great crime in Shelton?

Monday, July 13, 2009

Chapter 18 Sneak Peek

So I about threw out another Kelsey passage. I think I may have an unnatural obsession with her character. LOL. She def my favorite minor character, that's for sure. I'm already in the working for conjuring up a special somebody for her in book two. (But you didn't hear that from me *cough*)

So, instead, I shall give THIS sneaky-peeky!

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“Still want to find out some things about Mr. Mendez.” He didn’t even have to ask the question. “We’re going to have to go through your father’s papers. We need to see what he’s been doing.”

“You mean like trespass?”

“Addie!” he hissed. “I don’t know if you realize this, but you’re in your own home.”

“Yes, but his office is like his private dominion.”

“And we’re going to have to take a look at his private dominion if you want to find anything out about this Mendez bloke.” But still I hesitated at the door. “I never took you to be a coward.”

“I’m not a coward!” I pushed him aside and pushed open my father’s office door. Too late, I realized that I had played right into his hands. My temper flared even more, but I shoved it down as I went over to my father’s desk. I should get a medal for self-control.

“So what is it we’re looking for?”

“I don’t know,” I muttered as I looked down at my father’s desk. I was surprised to see it so cluttered. I had always taken him to be a very neat man. I felt an unexpected tug of sadness. I really knew so little about him. “This was your idea.”

“Have you really done no investigating?”

“I fight crimes. I don’t attempt to solve them.”

“And you’re supposed to be everybody’s hero . . .” Not anymore though . . . I tried to ignore the pain that was pressing on all sides of my body. The greatest hero had fallen. “Look for a letter or a document marked private. See if he had a key. Perhaps there’s a safe in here where your father keeps all of his important documents.”

I highly doubted it. But then again . . . what did I know about my father? I ignored the mess that covered his desk and instead opened up his front drawer. He’s going to find out that I went through his things. I just knew it. Flyboy was already riffling through all of the papers that were sprawled across the desk. Apparently, he had no qualms with going through other people’s stuff.

“Stop hesitating, you certainly didn’t have a problem trying to get into my drawers,” he said. His phrasing made me blush slightly, even though I realized he was talking about the night I tried to break into his own desk. I looked down at the drawer I had opened. It was full of letters. I had hit the jackpot.

I quickly glanced at the return addresses on a few of them. My grandmother. My dad’s best friend from college, Larry. My uncle Thomas who had yet to grow up . . . currently I believed he was in Kansas City. Bentley . . . Bentley?! What could my father possibly have to say to Bentley?

I dropped all of the other letters in my hand and pulled the letter out of the already ripped envelope. “Find something interesting?” Flyboy asked as he laid the pages he was perusing aside.

I ignored him, focusing on the letter.

Dear Charles,

Thank you for writing about your concerns for Adaline. You are correct in assuming that I have been maintaining contact with her since the move. This adjustment has not been easy on her. After all, The City life is all she has ever known. However, I believe that she is beginning to embrace her life in Shelton a bit too much. From what I can perceive from our phone conversations, she has been spending time with questionable characters. Your daughter is a good lass, but she is overly naïve as well. Take special care to keep watch over her. Her friends, which have been influencing her, may be part of the motives behind her rebellious nature as of late. While it is normal for teenagers to experiment and try new things, I believe it’s safe to say that both of us want to keep our Adaline out of harm’s way. Cutting back on hours at work and spending time at home may be one way to help bring Adaline back from this dangerous road she has been traveling down since arriving in Shelton.

Regards,

Bentley

I didn’t know which was more of a shock. The fact that my father actually noticed me enough to care about my well-being to write about it to Bentley or the fact that Bentley would tell my father such outrageous lies.

I knew which one hurt the most.


Wooooo . . . . Chapter Eighteen RULES!!!! lol. Sorry. We're looking at a major story about Volt on the Sunday paper, a sophomore butting into a certain superhero's life, AND a major secret revealed!!!!

1 comments:

  1. Gasp! A major secret revealed! What could it be?? Cannot wait. Yay! I'm this story's biggest fan. :D

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